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dumbledorelover
03-19-2006, 03:24 AM
A single tear rolled down Erik's cheek. "No," he whispered. A hope, unlikely and desperate, but a hope nonetheless. That Christine would hear him, run to him, comfort him, be his again. No.

He choked down the worst of his sobs, enough for him to think about the recent past. But this brought nothing but more sorrow for him, and eventually, he had to give in to the grief that clawed at his heart.

She was so close to being the first one to truly love him, so close to being the one that he held dear. He had never known what love was until the blessed, yet cursed, day that he heard her lovely voice cast a spell around his heart. It could not be true, he would not accept it!

And yet. . .

Rapturous Angel
03-19-2006, 11:15 PM
OOH!! I like the intro to it! Can't wait for you to continue!

AAW0487
07-12-2006, 06:48 AM
Oh I do hope you continue! It's so interesting! *waits and ponders what happens next*

SocialMisfit
08-04-2006, 05:02 AM
Eeeeek, more! Please?

Silverstream
08-04-2006, 11:15 AM
Please! More!

AOM35
08-04-2006, 08:43 PM
Yes please!!! More! I'm just hope that this isn't going to make me cry..... *gets tissue box ready*

The Floor
08-31-2006, 11:00 PM
Pshhhhhht. I hope it makes me cry! So... is there more? Cuz... this is kinda short. ^_^

ih8clowns4
11-03-2006, 08:41 PM
love it!

MaskedRose
12-12-2006, 02:35 PM
Genius!!!!!

queen
12-12-2006, 09:10 PM
I think it is a excellent prose. Quality is not quantity,I have been told.

Dumbledroeslover is very skillfull is puttin drama into a couple of lines. That is a talent that few posses.