All I Ask Of You-Erik and Christine

[MissDay7000]

Okay, here's a little something I else I wrote around the time I did my lyrics, I'm rather fond of them, and I hope you will be too.
IMPORTANT NOTE: the words to this song are to ALW's "All I Ask of U" keep that in mind when you are reading this, it may be a little more difficult than my POTO lyrics was to get the words right with the melody, SOUND IT OUT!
Lots of luv, MissDay7000

Verse: Christine: You were once my Angel,
My one and only friend,
In you, I found my music, and you taught me to use it
But then you deceived me,
and told me empty lies
I can no longer trust you, I never really knew you

Chorus: Phantom: All I wanted was to be your only
To be thought of as your everything
How can you you think i would ever harm you?
In your hands you've always held me heart
Christine, Don't tear that heart apart.

Verse: Christine: Don't say that you love me
I cannot say the same
My love lies with another, I've loved him like a brother
I know he adores me
We're both so much alike
It's right, this is expected, my life will be protected

Chorus: Phantom: Is this what you really want or is it,
Something you believe will just suffice?
I would make you the most cherished woman
All you have to do is just agree...
Christine, say you'll stay with me

Chorus: Christine: Don't say things like this to just torment me
My decision was made long ago
I could never give you what you wish for
I could never be all that you need...
Angel, it's time to set me free.

Music Crescendo....

Together: There will never be one that's like you!
Together, But Separate: Phantom: Christine, I will always love you!
Christine: Angel, I'll never forget you!

[The Floor]

Reading it as a poem, I really like it. It honestly made me choke up. But as a song, I think it still doesn't quite have the right rhythm to the words. I'll give you this, though: it is ridiculously hard to come up with lyrics that sound good and fit the music - I know; I've tried it myself. Kudos, girl.

[MissDay7000]

thanks demure seductress, and you're right: finding lyrics that matched up with this song was extremely difficult, they could be so much better, but unfortunately i'm not a pro lyricist, so i did what i could.

MissDay

[AAW0487]

MissDay, once again you have done a great job, but it makes me very sad. Ugh I wish Christine and the Phantom would just end up together, but ::sigh:: Oh well you have done great work. It is true that you have to sound out some of the words to make it work, but you've done a wonderful job! Brava!

[MissDay7000]

Once again, thank you for your comments! :) They are well appreciated!

[SocialMisfit]

Nice. I liked it.

[Chance_or_Destiny]

I have to agree with the seductress, I really liked it - but more as a poem. I think that it might be because in some places it wasn't as easy to follow in the tune. But over all it was wonderful, i've seen few with the talent to pull it off - but you manage to. Keep the good work comming Miss Day!

[MissDay7000]

Thank you Chance_Or_Destiny- I agree with you and others too-this one was a little harder for me to write than the others so it probably does work better as a poem, huh? But I'm glad you liked it just the same.

:),
MissDay

[darcimkire]

this is great! i love it!..