My new boyfriend(poem)

[life_is_a_day_dream]

My new B/F
He Makes me smile when I am sad.
I Can hardly breath when he is in the room.
I feel lost without him.
he pulled me from the darkness when I lost my way and showed me the light.
When I was giving up on love he came around and showed me that love still exist.
I only hope that this love will last.
I know this poem may not make since.
I know this may be short.
Lame or what ever else.
Thats becuase words can not discribe how he makes me feel.
So I will leave you with these small words.
There short and sweet so please take note.
"Never give up hope. You may not fnd theright one right away bbut if you keep your heart,soul, and mind open you will find a guy as good as mine and then just then will you really know how he makes me feel.

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[Masqued Mystery]

That's a lovely poem. I like how you didn't try to follow any conventional styles of poetry, but just stated the way you felt. It's nice to read a poem thinking 'outside the box.' :)