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Raoul de Chagny
07-09-2005, 02:53 PM
Here are the winners of the Create Your Own Opera competition recently held.

We asked you to write the lyrics to your own opera song and choose a character from POTO who would sing your song.

Thankyou for all your wonderful entries, just for entering you've all received 5 roses.

The winners are:

1st Prize - 100 Roses and custom avatar 100x100.
IamErik771
What I Could Have Been
Performed by Erik

From the moment I first saw light,
I've been feared and shunned by man
I never got my chance
To do everything I know I can,
My soul is plagued by the venom of hate
Nobody ever saw that with my mind and my skills,
I could have been great...

If only they could understand,
If only they could see
If they had only dared to try
And find the real me,
But love is a prize I know I'll never win...
I'm haunted by dreams of what I could have been.

Ever since the day I was born,
A mask has hidden my true face
My long, sad life has taught me
Not to trust the human race
But like the ghost I am, I've had to hide,
Disappear, and nobody could see
Who I was inside...

If only they could understand,
If only they could see
If they had only dared to try
And find the real me,
But thanks to God's "mercy," I have lived in sin,
And I'm haunted by dreams of what I could have been...

Nobody could ever see the man within...
I'm haunted by dreams of what I could have been.

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2nd Prize - 50 roses
SyioandthePhantom
Song Name: Se me here.
Sung by: Parts by Erik and Christine.
Song is sung in French or English depending.

Erik:
Comme mon sang ruisselle le long des murs, attrape la goutte avant qu'il tombe,
Essayez de se souvenir des bons temps avec moi; Je sais que vous aimiez le chemin j'étais,
Ainsi fermez vos yeux et retenez votre souffle, essayez d'oublier ma mort solitaire
Maintenant courez de la lumière et dans la nuit
C'est temps pour être seul, je suis maintenant Ã* la maison,
Je vole maintenant sur plaines de herbe; c'est temps pour aller je ne sais pas comme,

Christine:
Je pleure encore le vent emporte ma voix, je meurs aujourd'hui.
Je souhaite vous laisser savoir, je vous aimais donc.
Je souhaite que je puisse vous entendre; Je Sais les peurs mondiales vous,
Je ne me soucie pas que votre visage est gâté, je vous aime seulement le chemin que vous êtes,
Erik and Christine together:
S'il vous plaît attendez et voyez, je sais cela qui

English

Erik:
As my blood drips down the walls, catch the drip before it falls,
Try to remember the good times with me; I know you loved the way I used to be,
So close your eyes and hold your breath, try to forget my lonely death
Now run from the light and into the night
It's time to be alone, I am now home,
I fly over grassy plains now; it's time to go I don't know how,
I cry yet the wind takes my voice away, I die today.
I wish to let you know, I loved you so.

Christine:
I wish that I could hear you; I know the world fears you,
I care not that your face is marred, I like you the way you are,
Please wait and see, I know just what you think of me,
I believe love comes first; yours is going to make my heart burst,
I understand we will reach the sky, But please don't leave me please don't die,

Erik and Christine together:
I want the world to know, I will never let you go

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3rd Prize - 25 Roses
Night feather
Sung by Christine to Erik

Your musicÂ’s playing on
Inside my head
Burning bright
The music never leaves
From my mind
From my dreams

The memories grow old
But never leaves
Never leaves
The music form the ape
Still haunting me
Haunting me

The sight of you face
As you cry
Are burned into my mind

If you ever loved
And I loved you back
Then please take me away
From all of my pain
If you heard my song
Calling for you
Would you come back?
To let us lead
The life we never had

The memories of my past
Never fades
Never fades
Bittersweet Goodbye
Is all I have
All I have

The sound of your voice
As you sung
Steals tears from my eyes

If there is a chance
That youÂ’ll learn to forgive
The feelings that I caused
Sealing your fate
If you hold me tight
And whisper of nights
Then I will stay
To the world reaches itÂ’s end
To seek solace in you

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Congratulations to the winners and everyone who participated. All roses have been awarded and IamErik771 please PM your avatar to an admin to upload it for you. But because you are in the Opera Companies Competition, you can save your custom avatar for after the competition.

toxic fruit
07-09-2005, 03:22 PM
Congrats winners! You are all so talented!

syioandthephantom
07-09-2005, 06:48 PM
Thanks, I owe alot of it to my friends Zelda for helping me out, and Elizabeth(not on this site) wrote the first 3 lines of the song that Erik sings, and inspired me to write the rest of the songs. So everyone give them a big round of applause! Thanks again.

wolfwynd
07-09-2005, 08:55 PM
Congratualtions guys :D

Angelic
07-10-2005, 06:20 AM
Congratulations to all the winners, those lyrics are beautiful and poetic.

Ataraxia
07-10-2005, 11:49 PM
Congrats to everyone who won :D Great job!

Night feather
07-13-2005, 04:57 PM
Thanks alot for al the positive remarks.

The song was special to me, and it's wonderful to see that other ones than me lieks it as well.

IamErik771
07-13-2005, 05:05 PM
Wow, I didn't see this for a while. Thanks, everyone! I'm glad you liked my lyrics. I'm still working on my custom avatar; I promise it will be ready soon! :)

King Kovifor
07-13-2005, 05:34 PM
Congrats Guys. The lyrics werer pretty interesting to read.

Opera Ghost
07-14-2005, 09:38 AM
Those are brilliant, well done all! The lyrics are beautiful and moving. You really are good writers - much better than anything I could ever do.

OG

angelofmusic1308
07-29-2005, 09:32 PM
Cangrats! Great work!

Sex Pistols
08-06-2005, 04:41 AM
Those are brilliant! Congrats guys! :nod:

Oiseau de Chanson
08-07-2005, 10:08 PM
those lyrics are fantastic!! Congratulations!

Luciana
08-13-2005, 02:09 AM
Great job guys. I really liked reading the lyrics. That must have taken a while to do!

Hope you guys write more... Let me know if you ever want someone to read and critique. I like being important :D

But you guys did amazing.

cinty
08-28-2005, 01:40 PM
what an absolutely beautiful effort by all of you! I should check into this part of the forum more often. *blushes*. But anyway, those lyrics are absolutely beautiful and very special, and ring so true and meaningful. You are all brilliant. Good work!!!

The_Persian
08-28-2005, 07:36 PM
Good job guys! You are all so talented!
They are all so beautiful, but I particularly like Syio's.... well done!

Angel_Of_Music0_G
10-07-2005, 12:02 AM
Congratulations to every one! Those words were beatuiful and inspiring

DonJuanTriumphs
12-26-2005, 05:18 AM
Those were really good, you guys have talent!