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Name: Seren | Gender: Nonbinary/androgyne | Age: 28 | Posts: 1,031 | Roses: 10
Old 12-17-2011 at 05:12 PM
Wandering Child
Dial A For Alan.

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Wow. I think you're off to a good start, m'dear, and the only thing I can suggest for improvements would be to remove the asterisks because they made it a bit of a challenge to read, IMO.

Otherwise, keep on writing, and I look forward to the next chapter(s).

There are many bodies of water in this world;

Yet none would quench my thirst for you.
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