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Name: margarita | Gender: lonely heart | Posts: 38 | Roses: 10
Old 04-27-2008 at 09:28 PM
cornholianphantomess
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Hey guys,another day,another chapter.

Chapter 4

Meg and Bertie secretly meet,since they can't be seen at the opera together.They plan to meet in Piangi's hospital room(he's in a coma,so who the hecks is he gonna tell?And Carly only comes at certain hours,so they know to watch out for her)Chrissy has been hearing Raoul as her angel of music,but not knowing its him.Raoul is steadily getting better at singing with what he's learned.Erik is writing tons of songs for Raoul to sing to her and writing Jerri a threatening note for acting like she owns the place.The Phantom is also writing a note to Andre,M.Reyer,and Raoul about an extra scene in Don Juan for Raoul and Chrissy to show off his new music skills.They plan for Chrissy to reherse her part and not know who her partner is until the show.Everyone hears that Chrissy gets a duet.Jerri and Carly are jealous since she gets a special part and they can't do anything about it unless they can be understudys and get somebody to song with them..Everyone gives Ally a hard time since she's in the lead part,but can't sing as well as the others.She goes to Erik and says' "I don't want to be harrassed by people anymore!Can't you give the part to someone else?"Erik says "I can't do that!I already have a part for everyone and I have to stick to the plan of giving Chrissy's mind to Raoul!So you just have to hang on and pray,'cause wegot to pray just to make it today!" Ally feels better after they pray.Erik and Raoul get better with their lessons and for dudes who were trying to kill each other,they became tight like spandex.Jerri and Carly both have a plan to "make Chrissy have some accident" and be understudys with some guy that they choose to sing with.Carly tells her plans to her friends and Erik gets word of it.Erik stops Chrissy in an empty room and says"Oh no you ain't nabbing that part from Chrissy.I worked too hard to plan this show!" Carly is furious and leaves to go see Piangi in the hospial.When she opens the hospital door,she sees Meg and Bertie together.As they run out of the room, Bertie hands Meg a ring.

To be continued..............................
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Old 04-30-2008 at 12:00 AM
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Can't say I'm sad to see you go..<3

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GASP I haven't voted yet? Ooo, my bad. I'll do that after I post my reply. :)

Brava! Ooo, that ending was to..."whats-gonna-happen-y"! I can't wait to find out. :) Good job, and good luck! :D

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Old 05-19-2008 at 01:58 PM
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Thanks for posting you guys!And please don't stop!If theres something that you have to say about it,let it out!I appreciate those who read it and love it!
I won't be writing too often but maye i'll finish it someday.
And if enough people like it,I might write the third Phantom story!
I know,I just don't quit!
Sooooo,thats it,please comment,I live your opinions of my fic!cd1:



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Old 05-25-2008 at 01:32 AM
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Elisabeth...

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Hilarious! Keep going!


Proud Raoul Phan. You've just got to love him!
"Lehr’ mich wieder ohne Angst zu leben..."
"Wenn ich tanzen will, dann tanz ich so wie's mir gefällt...
"Han kom till mig en natt, som i en dröm... Hans röst var manande men ändå öm..."
I now have a thing for Swedish...
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Old 05-26-2008 at 06:19 PM
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I will not give up my own self...

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Ha, it's so very funny! 'Who the heck is he gonna tell?" :D

But it's a little hard to read, could you put more spaces in, like after periods?
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Old 06-18-2008 at 07:33 PM
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Darlings,its been too long!!!!!!!
I might write some more!Thanks to the people who comment,you are appreciated!

Chapter 5(part 1)

Carly forgets Piangi and goes to the opera to tell of what she's seen,but Erik Erik stops her and locks her up temporarily,because we don't need that extra drama!Ally's singing is ridiculed by some other performers and right when she feels like she's about to cry,she hears Erik's voice to comfort her.But so does Chrissy who is appalled and thinks"What is this Villany????!!!!!! My angel is talikng to some other chick!!!"Chrissy is down and decides not to do the show.Everyone panics since Raoul cant show her it's him who's been singing,Phantom can't show that he's gotten over Chrissy,and Jerri will get the part instead of Chrissy and everythings headed for disaster!!!Phantom is frustrated down in his lair,since he put a lot of work into that plan.Ally visits him and says"I know you're frustrated,and we both know you have problems with anger.So to help,I bought you some Dr. Phil tapes!!" Then she touches the right side of his head."that intensive aloe lotion is working isn't it?" Erik is watching his tapes when Raoul and meg come down to say the show has started and Crissy went to the cemetary and Jerri is the understudy.Everyone is worried,but then Erik has the most amazing plan!!!

to be continued......
thanks and please comment!!
I know its short but work with me here!!!



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Old 06-25-2008 at 08:30 AM
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Oh, I like it. I think it's funny. But, as other people have said, can you please add spaces for ease of read? But apart from that, congratulations.
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Old 06-25-2008 at 09:48 PM
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Can't say I'm sad to see you go..<3

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Ooo! Very nice!! I am glad it is to be continued! If it isn't....well...there might be some changes in your facial arrangement...LOL Just kidding, just kidding. :D Happy writing!


I'll never let this go, but I can't find the words to tell you

I don't want to be alone, but now I feel like I don't know you
Opinions I would try and rewrite
If life had background music playing your song
I've got to be honest, I tried to escape you
But the orchestra plays on

~Banners by Tianna, Chrissy, Mark, and Jasmine~1 of 4 Proud Spouses to Viktoria!~Special thanks to Hayley W. and Stephan C.~
~I love little Mr. Bob ~
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Old 06-26-2008 at 10:01 PM
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Emmy is scaring me,but if she does scar me,Erik and I can match!!!!!
You folks won't leave me alone about those spaces!
I have to write fast,so I don't have time for spaces,sorry,but thats how it is!
I been dreaming of a tue loves kiss!!!!



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Old 07-20-2008 at 01:24 AM
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He he he!! Sorry! LOL I need you to post more though. :) That would satasfy my need to....rearrange things...MWHAHHA! LOL Joking.


I'll never let this go, but I can't find the words to tell you

I don't want to be alone, but now I feel like I don't know you
Opinions I would try and rewrite
If life had background music playing your song
I've got to be honest, I tried to escape you
But the orchestra plays on

~Banners by Tianna, Chrissy, Mark, and Jasmine~1 of 4 Proud Spouses to Viktoria!~Special thanks to Hayley W. and Stephan C.~
~I love little Mr. Bob ~
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