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Old 10-28-2008 at 04:02 AM
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Excellente, Laura. Verrah good writing indeed... Of course, it induced a shocked Mormon girl gasp out of me (yeah right. xD) but all the same.

I don't really have time to notice any mishaps with it at the moment, but when I get my homework done and all, I'll come back and read it more thoroughly.

Hasta la Vista, Baby!

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Old 10-28-2008 at 10:10 PM
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Holy cow that was cool. Hehe, the fop gets dumped, hehe. That wins points in my book and Erik being dark and possessive is like hot. Again, that was awesome and cool and well, just all around great.



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Old 11-02-2008 at 12:54 AM
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Thank you, Nancy and Angel for the amazing reviews! I cannot tell you how much your kind words mean to me! Thanks again!

Laura



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Old 11-13-2008 at 12:56 AM
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Oh, my, gosh. I loved it! I was amazed at how I could not stop reading. When he brought her down to the dungeon was so well described, her fear, his pleasure, Raoul's surprise! Ugh, GIVE ME MORE! Hahah. :)


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Old 11-14-2008 at 05:08 AM
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I can't believe I missed those comma things. *blush* Er, thank you! :D
Hey look, I make more mistakes than you do...so you should be embarrassed. So if you saw mistakes that are killing you in my story please do message me the mistakes that you make...b/c I totally messed up the entire thing! :)

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Old 11-21-2008 at 06:41 PM
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Thank you Kiri_Giry for the review, I am thrilled that you liked it!!!

Erika (oops, should I call you Patricia now? :P), I have already read and sent you the things I noticed in your story that might need correcting some time ago. If you're talking about a different story, than please send me the link and I would be happy to help you. If not, I shall wait for an update in your story and read it as soon as you post! ;)

Laura



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Old 11-21-2008 at 11:50 PM
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Thank you Kiri_Giry for the review, I am thrilled that you liked it!!!


Laura

Please! Call me Kiri! I hate all the formality of saying, "Kiri_Giry" feel free to call me anything you like as long as it's not, "Hey stupid!" Hehe. But yes, your story had me almost as addicted as the Twilight series. I definitly think you should continue.


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Old 11-22-2008 at 12:56 AM
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Okay, Kiri! I like the name, it's unique!

Hmm. You know I've honestly never really considered continuing this, it was just a one-shot I wrote in a moment of inspiration. It's meant to be incorporated into my work in progress phanphic Obsession. Perhaps I could continue this though...in my spare time of course.

Laura



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Old 12-01-2008 at 07:52 PM
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Dear Laura,

I think the story is great and I hope you choose to continue it. Great job! You are really good at details.

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Old 02-21-2009 at 04:51 AM
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Thank you, Ashley! :)

Hey! I see the number of people viewing this thread climbing and...no reviews. *coughs politely* Pleeease, I love to hear any and all constructive criticism, even if you hated it! ;)



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